Friday, November 20, 2015

Effort

It makes Sense
WALT entertain the audience
Success Criteria:
  1. I plan for the writing task
  2. I write sentences that make sense
  3. I have colour, taste, smell, look, sound and feel each on a new line.
  4. I use specific words in the poem.
  5. I attempt to write words I don’t know by using my sound/letter knowledge or a dictionary.
  6. I use commas, exclamation marks, capital letters and full stops correctly.
  7. I will present my poem on an A4 paper from the tote tray.  I need to think about making sure the reader will be able read my writing.

Effort
Effort looks like a red face from trying hard.
Effort smells like sweaty armpits.
Effort feels like your heartbeat thumping in the back of your head.
Effort sounds like puffing and loss of breath.
Effort tastes like the relief of wetting your dry mouth.
Effort is trying your best even when times get hard.
It doesn't matter about the outcome, it is the effort that counts.
You know you have put in lots of effort when mum and dad are proud!
                             

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